Telling Lies to reveal an Inner Truth

That’s what fiction writers do. They tell lies (stories) to give the reader an insight into the human condition.

Because, let’s face it, if you are anything like me your days are filled with endless running on the spot, just to keep from going backwards.

You run to get the kids to school, part time jobs and uni. You run to get the house work done (shopping, cooking, washing). You run to get to work with everything ready so you don’t let yourself or anyone else down. And you run to make the time to do the extra things that make life worth living. (For me it is writing and story related).

With all that running it’s easy to overlook the profound in the everyday. (We all need a bit of  time to sit back and watch the waves).

Writers who told lies to reveal inner truths:

Charles Dickens ‘Oliver Twist – recurrent theme of social reform and good versus evil.

Mary Shelley, ‘Frankenstien’ – What is human?

Jane Austen ‘Pride and Prejudice’ – The title gives this one away.

George Orwell ‘1984’ – The danger of a totalitarian state.

William Golding ‘Lord of the Flies’ – Golding claims the book was written to trace the problems of society back to the sinful nature of man.

Ray Bradbury ‘Farenheit 451’ – The repression of the questioning mind by the destruction of books (access to knowledge).

Ursula K Le Guin ‘Left Hand of Darkness’ – Explores the themes of gender, politcis and religion.

If you are a modern writer who wants to explore an inner truth this could be confronting for your readers. You have to overcome their unconscious prejudices before you can win them over to identify with your protagonist. Once they identify with a character they can feel empathy. And empathy is what leads to insight.

This is why the genres Fantasy and SF are so powerful. By removing nouns loaded with associations, the writer can introduce characters that the reader responds to and explore themes without risk if distancing the reader.

If you are writing a contemporary novel you have to do lots of research to get your facts right. If you get something wrong someone will know and it will throw them out of the book. Once you break the suspension of disbelief you lose your reader. But, even with all that research, you won’t be able to find the perfect set-up to put your character in so you can challenge the protagonist and explore your underlying theme because you are limited to the world as we know it.

An invented world gives the writer the freedom to create settings and events specifically to test their characters and explore their themes. This is why fantasy and science fiction are such powerful genres. (With invented worlds you still do lots of research so that the worlds are consistent and believable).

In 2004, Le Guin gave a talk at the Children’s Literature Breakfast, where she described what she sees as the function fantasy serves in contemporary society.

“Fantasy is a literature particularly useful for embodying and examining the real difference between good and evil. In an America where our reality may seem degraded to posturing patriotism and self-righteous brutality, imaginative literature continues to question what heroism is, to examine the roots of power, and to offer moral alternatives. Imagination is the instrument of ethics. There are many metaphors beside battle, many choices besides war, and most ways of doing good do not, in fact, involve killing anybody. Fantasy is good at thinking about those other ways.”

So there you have it, writers tell lies to reveal inner truths. What books have made you stop and think?

Lots of analysis of books and their themes here.

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Doing the Happy Dance!

You know how writers labour away for years in back rooms writing books, throwing their whole heart into these series, never knowing if anyone will read their stories?

Well,  every once in while the fates of publishing smile on the struggling author  and  these series do sell. This is one of those days. So I’m definitely Doing the Happy Dance!

Solaris have bought my First T’En trilogy.

Book one:
This series follows the fate of a tribe of  mystics, the T’Enatuath. Vastly outnumbered by people without magical abilities, the mystics are persecuted because ordinary people fear their gifts.

This persecution culminates in a bloody pogrom sanctioned by the King who lays siege to the Celestial City, last bastion of the T’Enatuath.

A fantasy-family saga, the characters are linked by blood, love and vows as they struggle with misplaced loyalties, over-riding ambition and hidden secrets which could destroy them. Some make desperate alliances only to suffer betrayal from those they trust, and some discover great personal strength in times of adversity.

You know how to fall in love with your characters?  I fell in love with these people.  I’m over the moon now that the trilogy has sold!

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Favourite Movies

Tomorrow for work I get to watch The Princess Bride. (I get to watch it three times in a  row …)

I discovered the original book many years ago and never forgot it. Then, when the movie first came out I saw it and it has been a firm favourite of mine ever since.

For the amusing back story on the story within a story see this section on Wikipedia. Some authors have a wicked sense of humour. But then Goldman would have to, to write the book in the first place.

It must have the best sword duel (Montoya and the Dread Pirate Roberts on top of the cliffs) and the best revenge scene:

Inigo Montoya: Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.
Count Rugen: Stop saying that!

When I teach writing dialogue I always mention The Princess Bride.  There are so many memorable quotes from it, it’s hard to decide which is my favourite. For a full list of memorable quotes see here.
Some are underplayed but strong, like this one:

[Vizzini has just cut the rope The Dread Pirate Roberts is climbing up]
Vizzini: HE DIDN’T FALL? INCONCEIVABLE.
Inigo Montoya: You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means.

And there is the very black scene where Count Rugen and Prince Humperdink are preparing to torture Westley.

Count Rugen: Your princess is quite a winning creature. A trifle simple, perhaps. Her appeal is undeniable.
Prince Humperdinck: I know, the people are quite taken with her. It’s odd, but when I hired Vizzini to have her murdered on our engagement day, I thought that was clever. But it’s going to be so much more moving when I strangle her on our wedding night. Once Guilder is blamed, the nation will truly be outraged – they’ll demand we go to war.
Count Rugen: [snickers, then examines a huge tree] Now where is that secret knot? It’s impossible to find…
[he finds it and the tree opens to reveal a hidden passage]
Count Rugen: Ah. Are you coming down into the pit? Wesley’s got his strength back. I’m starting him on the machine tonight.
Prince Humperdinck: [sincerely] Tyrone, you know how much I love watching you work, but I’ve got my country’s 500th anniversary to plan, my wedding to arrange, my wife to murder and Guilder to frame for it; I’m swamped.
Count Rugen: Get some rest. If you haven’t got your health, then you haven’t got anything.

Really, if you don’t have your health, you don’t have anything.

And lastly there is my favourite bit. How the phrase ‘as you wish’ is introduced.

Grandpa: [voiceover] Nothing gave Buttercup as much pleasure as ordering Westley around.
Buttercup: Farm boy, polish my horse’s saddle. I want to see my face shining in it by morning.
Westley: As you wish.
Grandpa: [voiceover] “As you wish” was all he ever said to her.
Buttercup: Farm boy, fill these with water – please.
Westley: As you wish.
Grandpa: [voiceover] That day, she was amazed to discover that when he was saying “As you wish”, what he meant was, “I love you.” And even more amazing was the day she realized she truly loved him back.

When I ask my husband to do something he says ‘As you wish’, just to tease me. You know that dialogue is memorable, when it becomes part of our shared world view. As my kids head off somewhere I can tell them to ‘Have fun storming the castle!’ and they know just what I mean.

Do you have a favourite quote from The Princess Bride?

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Being Human

When my husband said you must watch this show, it’s about a werewolf, a ghost and a vampire in a share house in Bristol trying to pass for human, I thought I have to see this.

This is the only show I actually watch on TV. (I really must get the series on DVD).

I thoroughly enjoyed the first season. And I’m finding the second season raises some lovely moral abiguities and puts the characters through the mill. Just the sort of quandries I like.

I love it that their ambition is to be ordinary!

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On the cover of Rolling Stone …

I had a day off work. I promised myself I would write and I was so looking forward to it. Today when I should have been writing:-

I made 3 trips to the train station to drop off and pick up teen age children.

Baked choc chip cookies with son number 4.

Discovered the cat had been shut in the bathroom and peed on the bathmat. (Why does cat pee smell so bad?)

Stripped the bathroom (threw out the mat) mopped the floor and …

Put through 3 loads of washing, brought in another 3 loads of washing (still not sorted and put away).

Went shopping with daughter number one and we set the world to rights over coffee.

Then daughter number two turned up and we had to set the world to rights, too.

The I opened my mail and discovered this …

My wonderful publishers, SOLARIS, have done a promo for the King Rolen’s Kin trilogy on the back of the 2000AD comic.  You know that line from the Dr Hook ‘Wanna get my Picture on the cover of Rolling Stone!’

Well this is not quite that but it is awfully close. Feeling really inspired despite the cat!

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Currently Reading …

I commute to work which is a half hour trip both ways. To save myself from boredom- also to save myself from reading over people’s shoulders as I can’t seem to resist the written word – I bring a book to read.

I’ve always enjoyed Georgette Heyer’s comedy of manners. This series has that sense of fun.

Werewolves, vampires and parasols, oh my!

I watched a documentary recently on the demise of the romance movie. Screenwriters were saying – Where is the romance and sexual tension if the guy and girl can hop into bed on the first date and no one blinks an eye.

In this series there is a great deal of eye blinking going on. I read it on the train and try not to giggle aloud.

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Are all dedicated readers aspiring writers?

I love reading.

But I can just remember a time when I couldn’t read. I was two and my mother had a picture in the bathroom. It contained a children’s nursery rhyme about cleaning up the bathroom. And after the bath, she’d point to it and read it and say, now you can’t leave the bathroom before you clean it up. So we’d put the toys away and hang up the bathmat.

I hated that picture because it had power over me and no matter how hard I tried I couldn’t see where the power came from.

I started school at four and I don’t remember learning to read.  It was the time of Dick and Dora and their dog Spot. (See Spot run. See Dick run. See Dora run. Riveting stuff). I remember being pages ahead of  the class because listening to them read was painful. When it came to my turn I had no idea where they were and the teacher thought I couldn’t read.

So reading is like breathing to me. I can’t help it. Conversely coming up with stories is also like breathing. There have always been stories in my head. I’d pester my poor grandfather for stories. And wonder why he couldn’t come up with dozens of them. His stories tended to be practical snippets like. You grab a snake behind the head real quick, and crack him like a whip to break his back. Grandfather was from the bush.

When I had my secondhand bookshop I’d read a book before lunch, a book after lunch and a book after dinner. (This was in the days when books were 60,000 words). Soon I’d read every book that interested me in my shop. I’d prowl the shelves searching for anything that piqued my interest. When ever someone bought in books to sell I’d put aside any that I found interesting and devour them.

But before long there were days when I could not find anything to read. Or I would start books and get annoyed with them. So I just had to write to feed my reading habit. That’s how I started writing.

Are all dedicated readers aspiring writers? Over at the ROR blog the Sunday Writing Craft post is a Checklist for Aspiring Writers.

I suppose it is different now that we can buy the DVD of our choice, surf the net and play computer games.  But sometimes, only a book will do. What do you do when you can’t find a book to read?

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Good News

Over at the Galaxy Bookshop’s Blog Spot there is a give away of The King’s Bastard and … drum roll …

Book one of King Rolen’s Kin has slipped into number 9 on their best seller list.

I can’t quite believe it.  A big thank you to all those people who have taken a punt on this new series. And a big thank you to the staff at Galaxy bookshop!

Where would we writers be without specialist bookstores?

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Not a review, more of a reflection …

Copies of KRK book one are presently winging their away across the globe to the US, the UK, but also, Malta, Romania and Sweden!

So far there’s this post, which isn’t exactly a review, more reflection on the book.

She says:

‘Some mornings you have a dream that’s so wonderful you don’t want to wake up.  It’s full of unanswered questions and ideas that need to be followed.  The remnants of those thoughts cling to every moment of your day, but dreaming once more brings no relief.  Ah, the dream is lost forever!
The ending to The King’s Bastard reminded me of this feeling. ‘

You can read the rest of the post here.

I find it interesting because it isn’t about the plot or the writing. It’s about one person’s reaction to the book.

As a writer, I’m reaching out, sharing my dreams with readers. It’s nice to know I reached someone.

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DUF Giveaway

It is always a thrill when someone you’ve known for years gets published. Here is the cover of Nicole Murphy’s new  book, first of a series. They are dark urban fantasy.

Over on the ROR blog Nicole is talking about the process of getting published and there’s a giveaway!

The Dream of Asarlai is an urban fantasy trilogy being published in Australia by HarperVoyager. The first book, Secret Ones, is due to hit the shelves in July, with the other two books appearing next year.

Here’s the blurb.

She′s from an ancient clan. He has no family. Can they save the world … together?

Maggie Shaunessy is used to keeping secrets. She′s a fantastic teacher, but she′s also gadda, part of a hidden, powerful race – and she has a habit of annoying the wrong people.

Until Lucas Valeroso meets Maggie, he had no idea what awaited him: super-human powers, a smart and beautiful woman interested in more than unlocking his new abilities and, above all, a sense of belonging.

But dark ambition and dangerous bigotry are emerging in the gadda ranks. Lucas′s new family might cast him out before he′s even truly found his place. And Maggie must work with new allies to find and retrieve a missing artefact before the entire world is changed for all time.

′fresh and interesting approach to an urban fantasy series′ Bookseller+Publisher’

Support Aussie authors not only becaue they’re Australian, but because they write damn fine books!

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